I Miss You
I miss you.
I miss your warmth;
your blue eyes
enveloping me
in a rush of heat.
My heart pounding;
my blood pounding
and rushing to the surface.
Exhilaration all at once.
I miss you!
Love Poems (New Directions Paperbook)
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Last updated on July 30, 2013
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That strong desire does emerge when one is missed!! Exhilarating! Love it. In His Love, Faith Reaper
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Awesome short verse! The picture choice is brilliant... you keep looking at it...
Look.. keep looking.. and bang... the emotion hits you..
Great!
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This made me think of the old saying about separation makes the heart grown fonder, although I don't think I quoted that quite right. I loved the poem and the strong desire is palpable. Beautiful poetry.
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Beautiful and I love this poem. Thanks for writing and share with us. Rated up!
Prasetio
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You made my heart beat faster and faster with every line, I just stopped breathing at the end from the sheer emotions... Beautiful!
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Short and meaningful. Might be your masterpiece. Keep going.
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A fantastic poem I love this and voted up!
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I feel your yearning for that special person. These words evoke so much intense feelings of love and longing. Just beautiful, voting up and sharing.
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This was such a sweet poem. As Fennelseed said, you can feel the yearning. Glad she shared it. Well done.
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Very sweet poetry here, I'm compelled to read more by you, nice work!
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Lovely Poem!
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Stopped by to check out your work after seeing you at the cafe. Glad I did.
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