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In Fields Where Lovers Play
What game is this
So gently played
In fields were lovers play?
Your kiss so sweet
Reaches my lips
I gladly kiss you back
Your touch so gentle
Caresses me
Two hands entwined forever
Your eyes so bright
Look into mine
Cornflower blue amaze
Your musky smell
Flairs my nostrils
Dreamy I become
We sit and gaze
A smile curves up
A light in our eyes
You gently press
Against my breast
I close my eyes and feel
Your heartbeat
Fast, quickly pumps
Your breath against my cheek
Your kiss I hear
Beneath my ear
A symphony of music
You lay me down
Supine I feel
Your hand along my side
Take me to another world
Your love my swift Chariot
Carry on and on my love, on and on my sweet.
Copyright (c) 2013 Suzannah Wolf Walker all rights reserved
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Last updated on May 31, 2013
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I fell in love with the title...the poem was just icing on the cake. This is so beautiful in such a simple form...well done, Suzette.
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Billy: You are not going to believe how this title came about. I was writing a comment to one of Mhatter's poems and in my response this phrase just rolled off the fingertips. I liked it so much I thought I'd write a poem around it. lol So glad you enjoyed this and thanks for reading it.
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I, too, just love the title and, well, the brilliant and beautiful poem too, of course!
I wish I were right now in those very fields :)
Isn't it always fun from where our inspiration comes!
Voted up ++++ and sharing
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Blessings, Faith Reaper
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Beautiful poem!..sensuous and romantic...loved the images also.
Well done.
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I would love to play in your poetic field anyday my sensational Suzette.
Come and rescue this poor boy and take me away into your clover and heather and read me some more of your poetry in the light of the sun which adores you ..... like I do.
lol
Hubbravo to my favorite renaissance lady - man, you can do it all - you're at the top of your creative game here - and you just put me on cloud nine.
OOOOH LA LA .........
lake erie timeless for you
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Faith: Hi! Thanks so much for reading this. This was so fun to write. Yes, it is fun to follow our inspiration. When I looked at that phrase I thought, 'that makes a good title for a poem' and there you go. So glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for stopping by - most appreciated.
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Jo: That you so much for your lovely comments. As I said, this was fun to write. I'm so happy spring/summer is here now. Thanks for your visit.
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Epi: I'd love to be in one of those fields/meadows right now. Yes, a wonderful place for a poetry read. You are so romantic, Epi. It must be all that fresh Canadian air. Beautiful summer day here - in the high 80's and sun, sun, sun! Thanks so much for your lovely comments. You are such an inspiration and I have to work hard to keep up with you and your writing. Day after day you just churn out great poetry. Oh my! Thanks for stopping by - I always adore a visit by you!
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wow!! that's really wonderful...
I have just started writing and ther's long way to go.
Gotta lern lot from you.
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ram: Thank you so much for your kind words and comments. You will get there with lots of practice. I hope you enjoy your time here on HP. Thanks so much for your visit.
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Sultry and romantic---I can almost smell the field and flowers! ~Lurana
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Thank you . Your comments are so insightful and I'm glad you enjoyed this.
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Such a romantic poem and lovely choice of images, too.
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So beautiful and romantic Suzette~love the pictures and the great title too. What a great poem.
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As soon as I saw the title I could almost smell the tall grass in the fields. Very beautiful and moving poem.
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So very beautiful. I could see the meadow thanks to your lovely phrasing!
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This was a captivating poem, so full of imagery. You didn't really need the photos to illustrate it because your words are so vivid. The pics fit beautifully, however. So nicely done!
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Thank you Blossom. Your comments are always so thoughtful.
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Minnetonka Twin: Thank you so much for stopping by to read this. Most appreciated. I am so glad you enjoyed reading this.
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wayne: I know, sometimes certain words and images just take us away to another place. Thank you so much for stopping by to read this and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Your comments are so thoughtful.
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Theater girl: Thank you so much for your comments and for visiting. I appreciated it.
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Thanks so much Cyndi and I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. Your visit is appreciated.
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So romantic and dreamy, playful but sensual too! It's all here and it makes me go 'ah'. Beautiful!
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Cat: Thanks so much. It is fun to be playful and I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. Thanks so much and your comments are most appreciated.
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Absolutely romantically delightful. Passing this on.
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Gypsy: So glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for your support and passing on!
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