Monday, November 4, 2013

In Fields Where Lovers Play - a poem

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In Fields Where Lovers Play



What game is this
So gently played
In fields were lovers play?

Your kiss so sweet
Reaches my lips
I gladly kiss you back

Your touch so gentle
Caresses me
Two hands entwined forever

Your eyes so bright
Look into mine
Cornflower blue amaze

Flairs my nostrils
Dreamy I become

We sit and gaze
A smile curves up
A light in our eyes

You gently press
Against my breast
close my eyes and feel

Your heartbeat
Fast, quickly pumps
Your breath against my cheek

Your kiss I hear
Beneath my ear
A symphony of music

You lay me down
Supine I feel
Your hand along my side

Take me to another world
Your love my swift Chariot
Carry on and on my love, on and on my sweet.


Copyright (c) 2013 Suzannah Wolf Walker all rights reserved



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billybuc 5 months ago from Olympia, WALevel 8 Commenter
I fell in love with the title...the poem was just icing on the cake. This is so beautiful in such a simple form...well done, Suzette.
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suzettenaples 5 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Billy: You are not going to believe how this title came about. I was writing a comment to one of Mhatter's poems and in my response this phrase just rolled off the fingertips. I liked it so much I thought I'd write a poem around it. lol So glad you enjoyed this and thanks for reading it.
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Faith Reaper 5 months ago from southern USALevel 8 Commenter
I, too, just love the title and, well, the brilliant and beautiful poem too, of course!
I wish I were right now in those very fields :)
Isn't it always fun from where our inspiration comes!
Voted up ++++ and sharing
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Blessings, Faith Reaper
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tobusiness 5 months ago from bedfordshire, U.KLevel 7 Commenter
Beautiful poem!..sensuous and romantic...loved the images also.
Well done.
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epigramman 5 months agoLevel 8 Commenter
I would love to play in your poetic field anyday my sensational Suzette.
Come and rescue this poor boy and take me away into your clover and heather and read me some more of your poetry in the light of the sun which adores you ..... like I do.
lol
Hubbravo to my favorite renaissance lady - man, you can do it all - you're at the top of your creative game here - and you just put me on cloud nine.
OOOOH LA LA .........
lake erie timeless for you
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suzettenaples 5 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Faith: Hi! Thanks so much for reading this. This was so fun to write. Yes, it is fun to follow our inspiration. When I looked at that phrase I thought, 'that makes a good title for a poem' and there you go. So glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for stopping by - most appreciated.
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suzettenaples 5 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Jo: That you so much for your lovely comments. As I said, this was fun to write. I'm so happy spring/summer is here now. Thanks for your visit.
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suzettenaples 5 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Epi: I'd love to be in one of those fields/meadows right now. Yes, a wonderful place for a poetry read. You are so romantic, Epi. It must be all that fresh Canadian air. Beautiful summer day here - in the high 80's and sun, sun, sun! Thanks so much for your lovely comments. You are such an inspiration and I have to work hard to keep up with you and your writing. Day after day you just churn out great poetry. Oh my! Thanks for stopping by - I always adore a visit by you!
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rambofen044 5 months ago from RaipurLevel 1 Commenter
wow!! that's really wonderful...
I have just started writing and ther's long way to go.
Gotta lern lot from you.
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suzettenaples 5 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
ram: Thank you so much for your kind words and comments. You will get there with lots of practice. I hope you enjoy your time here on HP. Thanks so much for your visit.
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MrsBrownsParlour 5 months ago from Chicagoland, IllinoisLevel 7 Commenter
Sultry and romantic---I can almost smell the field and flowers! ~Lurana
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suzettenaples 5 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Thank you . Your comments are so insightful and I'm glad you enjoyed this.
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BlossomSB 5 months ago from Victoria, AustraliaLevel 7 Commenter
Such a romantic poem and lovely choice of images, too.
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Minnetonka Twin 5 months ago from MinnesotaLevel 6 Commenter
So beautiful and romantic Suzette~love the pictures and the great title too. What a great poem.
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wayne barrett 5 months ago from Clearwater FloridaLevel 7 Commenter
As soon as I saw the title I could almost smell the tall grass in the fields. Very beautiful and moving poem.
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Theater girl 5 months ago from New JerseyLevel 6 Commenter
So very beautiful. I could see the meadow thanks to your lovely phrasing!
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Cyndi10 5 months ago from GeorgiaLevel 6 Commenter
This was a captivating poem, so full of imagery. You didn't really need the photos to illustrate it because your words are so vivid. The pics fit beautifully, however. So nicely done!
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suzettenaples 5 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Thank you Blossom. Your comments are always so thoughtful.
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suzettenaples 5 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Minnetonka Twin: Thank you so much for stopping by to read this. Most appreciated. I am so glad you enjoyed reading this.
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suzettenaples 5 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
wayne: I know, sometimes certain words and images just take us away to another place. Thank you so much for stopping by to read this and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Your comments are so thoughtful.
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suzettenaples 5 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Theater girl: Thank you so much for your comments and for visiting. I appreciated it.
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suzettenaples 5 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Thanks so much Cyndi and I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. Your visit is appreciated.
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Cantuhearmescream 4 months ago from New YorkLevel 8 Commenter
So romantic and dreamy, playful but sensual too! It's all here and it makes me go 'ah'. Beautiful!
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suzettenaples 4 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Cat: Thanks so much. It is fun to be playful and I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. Thanks so much and your comments are most appreciated.
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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 months ago from Riga, LatviaLevel 8 Commenter
Absolutely romantically delightful. Passing this on.
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suzettenaples 3 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Gypsy: So glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for your support and passing on!
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