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Love Rising
Out of the ashes
our love will rise
finally complete and full
The tenderness of our love
will heal the painful past
of mixed up feelings and forget-me-nots
Of wanderings far and wide
over hill and dale
and deep blue sea
The beauty of our love
will rise with the sun
through a sky cerulean
Touched by the petals
of a rose so sweet
thorns protect so deep
The passions of our love
will sooth
our battered hearts
Strong will we be
against the tide
of doubts and shadows of fears
Out of the ashes
our love will rise
finally complete and full
Last updated on June 11, 2013
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So very beautiful, Suzzette! Enjoyed this very much, along with the amazing imagery.
Voted up ++ and sharing
Blessings, Faith Reaper
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Ah, like the phoenix, love shall rise. In your hands suzette- words rise! beautiful.
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Thank you Faith. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for the vote and share. Most appreciated.
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Thanks so much Docmo. I have learned a little about poetry from some great teachers here, you being one of them. Your poetry is exquisite. Thanks so much for the visit and for your comments - most appreciated.
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Beautiful, great poem. Vivid with a lot of emotion and passion. Great write. Voted up.
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So beautiful!!
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I like poems that take us places we need to examine within ourselves. Nice work!
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Suzette,
Lovely, lovely poem. The phoenix rising from the ashes, rebirth, renewal, one of my favorite metaphors. Beautiful language.
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Vellur: Thank you for your comments. I appreciate your visit.
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Thanks Audrey. Glad you enjoyed this.
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Marcy: Thank you and thanks for visiting and for your comments. Yes, we need to stop and look inside once and a while.
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LKMore: Thank you for reading this and for your lovely comments. I am glad you enjoyed this.
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I love how it starts and ends the same. The power of love is strong!
Thanks for sharing your great poem with us, and I hope you have a fantastic day!
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Thank you Kathryn. So glad you enjoyed reading this. Yes, the power of love is strong - I agree with you wholeheartedly. Thanks for your comments.
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Beautiful Poem - That first photo is so unique.
Great share.
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Suzette, a beautiful and very touching poem....there is nothing like a love that is strong and true....nice work!
Voting up and more.
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Out of the ashes
our love will rise
finally complete and full
Wonderful words Suzette; I love your poetry and vote up yet again.
Eddy.
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Out of the ashes - a shame that so many of us are reduced to ashes in this process called life. Your poetry certainly provides a gleamer of light.
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Thank you Lady E- isn't that photo wonderful. I saw it and was captivated by it and for me it illustrated what I was trying to say. Thank you so much for your visit - much appreciated.
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Jo: Thank you so much for your comments and for your visit. I'm so glad you like this poem of mine.
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Eddy: Thank you so much. Your words are touching also. I appreciated your visit.
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mckbirdbks: You are so right about that! Thanks so much for your insightful comments and for your visit - much appreciated.
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Well my 'love' always rises and my temperature too (lol) when I arrive here on your scene my sensational Miss Suzette. The Supremes did a song about it called The Happening!!!!! lol
Just woke up from night shift sleep to an overcast day again as if summer never happened (WTF) but the sun is shining right now because I am here with you with my first cup of coffee and a nice Vivaldi concerto.
Sending to you some really great energy from the three of us - Colin , and Tiffy and Gabriel - one more night shift and I am off for the weekend and a fabulous film to recommend to you - Wings of Desire by Wm Wenders - check it out on you tube and also The Haunting the original not the remake from 1963 by the director who helmed The Sound of Music - Robert Wise , also on you tube
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Beautiful words of poetry with lovely pictures :) Voted up and shared :)
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Just like the phoenix your love will rise, wonderful poem, and so sweet, nell
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Thanks so much Epi. I appreciate your visit and for reading this. I love Vivaldi, especially his 'Four Seasons.' It was sunny yesterday, but today is overcast and 'chilly' - only up to 70 degrees F today. Glad to hear you, Tiffy and Gabriel are doing fine. Give the kitties my love. Don't work too hard this week. Hope you get a better shift for next week. Thanks for the film recommendations I will certainly look into them. Take care!
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rdsparrowriter: Thanks so much for reading and viewing this. Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the vote and shares.
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Thanks Nell. So glad you enjoyed reading this. I appreciate your visit.
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Hi Suzette, this is a very beautiful and optimistic poem. You words are lovingly and carefully chosen, and really make the 'ambience' of it. Your pictures are literally out of this world, and really add to your theme. Wonderful effort!
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Thank you Vicki as I value your opinion on my writing. I am glad you enjoyed reading and viewing this. So glad for your visit, too.
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I love the message of hope and healing...beautiful illustrations too! ~lurana
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Thank you Lurana. I'm glad you enjoyed reading and viewing this. I appreciate your visit.
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This is great, Suzette! It's a very powerful message, and it's so full of imagery your words evoke. Strong, powerful, and hopeful
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