Monday, November 4, 2013

Teardrops falling from my eyes - a poem

                                                                      

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Teardrops falling from my 



You will never know
Teardrops are falling from my eyes
Because of you


The distance might as well
Be from here to Nepal
The Himalayas how far


The space between us
Is unfathomable
You are so deep at sea


I am here so sad
Needing you to be close
To me but no


You are wandering far
From my heart and soul
When I need you most


You are not near
This is why
Teardrops are falling from my eyes


Copyright (c) 2013 Suzannah Wolf Walker all rights reserved


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The Sadness of Others (Carnegie Mellon Poetry Series)
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suzzycue 4 months ago from Ontario, CanadaLevel 4 Commenter
I too am missing someone and totally relate to your wonderful poem.
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billybuc 4 months ago from Olympia, WALevel 8 Commenter
Long distance love affair or a love lost.....the pain of separation has been captured perfectly in this lovely poem.
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Faith Reaper 4 months ago from southern USALevel 8 Commenter
Very beautiful and sad too.
Voted up ++ and sharing
God bless, Faith Reaper
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BlossomSB 4 months ago from Victoria, AustraliaLevel 7 Commenter
Loved ones can be sadly missed even long after they have departed. A lovely poem.
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suzettenaples 4 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Thank you suzzycue. I'm sorry you can relate, but it feels good to get the feelings out.
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suzettenaples 4 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Bill: Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. It helps to write about it.
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suzettenaples 4 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Thank you Faith. I appreciate your visit and your comments. I'm on an emotional roller coaster right now over some things going on in my life. Thanks for the vote and sharing.
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suzettenaples 4 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Thank you so much Blossom. Your insight and comments are so appreciated.
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MrsBrownsParlour 4 months ago from Chicagoland, IllinoisLevel 7 Commenter
The brief verses are like teardrops. Sweet and sad.
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suzettenaples 4 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Thank you Lurana/ I'm glad you enjoyed this.
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tobusiness 4 months ago from bedfordshire, U.KLevel 7 Commenter
Suzette, this is beautiful and so very sad, many people will be able to relate to this poem. It is heart breaking when we stop communicating; we may physically share the same space, but just can't bridge the chasm which sometimes exists.
Very poignant and expressive poem, thank you for sharing.
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suzettenaples 4 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Thanks Jo. I appreciate your insightful and understanding comments. It is heartbreaking when communication breaks down and there is nothing that can be done. Thanks so much for reading this.
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Eiddwen 4 months ago from WalesLevel 8 Commenter
Beautifully sad Suzette and one of your best I am sure. Voted up , across and shared.
Eddy.
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suzettenaples 4 months ago from Naples, FLHub Author
Thanks so much Eddy. Thanks for the votes and share. Most appreciated.
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shanmarie 4 months ago from TexasLevel 7 Commenter
Beautiful sentiment, though sad.
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