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Teardrops falling from my
You will never know
Teardrops are falling from my eyes
Because of you
The distance might as well
Be from here to Nepal
The Himalayas how far
The space between us
Is unfathomable
You are so deep at sea
I am here so sad
Needing you to be close
To me but no
You are wandering far
From my heart and soul
When I need you most
You are not near
This is why
Teardrops are falling from my eyes
Copyright (c) 2013 Suzannah Wolf Walker all rights reserved
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Last updated on June 9, 2013
Teardrops falling softly - a poem
Falling (poem)Unfollow (8)Comments 15 comments
I too am missing someone and totally relate to your wonderful poem.
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Long distance love affair or a love lost.....the pain of separation has been captured perfectly in this lovely poem.
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Very beautiful and sad too.
Voted up ++ and sharing
God bless, Faith Reaper
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Loved ones can be sadly missed even long after they have departed. A lovely poem.
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Thank you suzzycue. I'm sorry you can relate, but it feels good to get the feelings out.
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Bill: Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. It helps to write about it.
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Thank you Faith. I appreciate your visit and your comments. I'm on an emotional roller coaster right now over some things going on in my life. Thanks for the vote and sharing.
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Thank you so much Blossom. Your insight and comments are so appreciated.
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The brief verses are like teardrops. Sweet and sad.
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Thank you Lurana/ I'm glad you enjoyed this.
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Suzette, this is beautiful and so very sad, many people will be able to relate to this poem. It is heart breaking when we stop communicating; we may physically share the same space, but just can't bridge the chasm which sometimes exists.
Very poignant and expressive poem, thank you for sharing.
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Thanks Jo. I appreciate your insightful and understanding comments. It is heartbreaking when communication breaks down and there is nothing that can be done. Thanks so much for reading this.
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Beautifully sad Suzette and one of your best I am sure. Voted up , across and shared.
Eddy.
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Thanks so much Eddy. Thanks for the votes and share. Most appreciated.
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Beautiful sentiment, though sad.
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