Suzette Says:: Love blossoms

Vase of Flowers by Renoir

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The concerto played as love blossoms

True love brings the music of love come to a crescendo for a couple in their lovemaking. When bodies unite as one, it is like a beautiful concerto being composed by the maestro, each small breath, move, touch, and kiss, playing like a Strativarius violin in concert. One movement , one sound, one love is the result of this concerto, and, then, the anticipation of the concerto and crescendo to be played again.

Love Blossoms

Beads of sweat trickle down my body.

I release my clutch;

You release your touch.

Your soft breath cools my scorched body;

How sensuous is your touch;

How soft your body, your closeness.

You shift your weight;

I close in to the crevice of your body

Aching for more of your touch.

Your lips softly glide over my damp skin,

Arousing me again.

My breath rises and falls in ecstasy,

In anticipation of what is to come.

I heave and gasp as I drown in your love;

My body quivers as you move within me.

My skin, electified by your touch; every fiber taut;

I feel the trembling of your body locked in mine.

A cataclysmic gasp as we both move in rhythm to the

Heated beat of our hearts as one;

Our internal cymbals clanging as one clashing concert

Emits from our bodies.

Locked in an incredible surge

Of one concerto erupting within us,

The hot, staccato, eighth notes spilling over the sides

As we release, pianissimo, and gently gasp for air;

Beads of sweat trickle down my body.

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Hyphenbird 2 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

Uh, I think I need a glass of water and a cigarette. Wow, this is so sensual but never vulgar. I knew you could publish your poetry. Go you!!!

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suzettenaples 2 years ago from Naples, FLHub Author

Thanks, Hyphen. I'm blushing now, because I can't believe I got up the nerve to publish this, but I did. I love your comment, because it is so appropriate, I know. So, far you are the only one to read this, so it's not so bad. I know you get it. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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Hear Me 2 years ago from Somewhere in Florida

Wow...this is a very thrilling piece. Great job!

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suzettenaples 2 years ago from Naples, FLHub Author

Thank you for reading this and for your kind comments. This was easy to write but difficult to publish. I'm happy to get good responses from this.

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Hear Me 2 years ago from Somewhere in Florida

Suzette, I know the feeling as I have written a few of these pieces. I am not as concerned about the readers of HubPages but I do get embarrassed when my family reads them. Keep up the good work.

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suzettenaples 2 years ago from Naples, FLHub Author

Hear Me: I agree with you. When family members read it is embarrassing. I haven't been on HubPages long enough to know it would be received, but I am pleasantly surprised. I figure, it someone doesn't like it, they can move on and not finish reading it. But, thank you for your interest.